The Bull and The Shrimp

This is my final edit of the shootout sequence.

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One Response to The Bull and The Shrimp

  1. kendalcollegefilm says:

    Good! I like the use of music in particular. Really this is two scenes. The first, of Edan waiting, is well cut—I know he’s a bully, and I know he’s waiting for something. The shots when you enter the room are also good—the tilt up to Edan, showing his height, and then the cut to you, work very well. But the second sequence isn’t as strong, though it’s the key to the story! Plenty to work with here though Kit—well done.

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